Wow, that was a very sad and powerful poem. There were times when you wanted to rhyme, and other times you didn't. It was weird. Lol, but it was still great.

I really liked this, it was sad but very emotional..it was very touching, I can relate alot to it, also! It was beautifully written..some of it wasnt a steady flow, but that is ok, it was still great!

I loved the first stanza.. The rest of the poem had a bit of a forced feel to it, but it was really good nonetheless. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Sad, but you did a really good job writing it 5/5