Comments : Im fine

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Broken and torn apart
    feelings of something restless
    keeping me up at night
    leaving me breathless

    This stanza and

    but now I'm back on my feet
    my soul is brushed clean new
    search through the mind
    find no thoughts of you

    were sooo good, i loved each of those lines.
    Amazing Poem!
    It is perfectly written!5/5
    Keep up the beautiful work!

  • 17 years ago

    by DancingForGod

    This poem is so beautiful! I loved it, especially this stanza:

    but now I'm back on my feet
    my soul is brushed clean new
    search through the mind
    find no thoughts of you

    Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mitsuki

    Such purity and Divine
    something i found
    in the heart of a liar
    depression was bound

    WHat a beautiful line.
    great job

  • 17 years ago

    by kyliecat009

    Nice imagry