I liked it but found it quite creepy as i could picture it all just as you described! but still gave u a 5!!

Hahaha thanks :P xx

Wow. This was just... wow. I guess I have a thing for murder. :) Anyways, I thought this was really unique and twisted, which I am very into. I loved the way you kind of changed the whole thing with the last line. I can't wait to read more.

Okay, sorry to write again, but I write fanfiction (stories based on tvshows and movies) on Fanfiction.net under the name 'Scarlett Ivy', and I was wondering if *pretty please* I could use your poem in one of my stories if I credit?? It would make me so happy... No hard feelings if I can't, though :)