Awwww.. that was really sweet! the emotion is clear and your descriptions are beautiful.. the last two lines are strong yet soft and sweet at the same time.. the only thing that i think you should change is how you capitalize every letter.. i feel that you should only capitalize the first letter of every line, but that is just me.. nice job! 5/5

Yeah thts a slight problem of mine lol i capitalze every letter if im typing fast, i type slower if i dont

Great job that poem was good and really sweet keep up the good work
~danielle~