Loretta,

It hurts to read this. It's beautiful but I caught myself nodding and understanding. I felt like this... I don't know if this is a life's experience but you capture the pain, the lost hope. The emptiness. Thank you. I've added you to my favorites!

Loretta,

It hurts to read this. It's beautiful but I caught myself nodding and understanding. I felt like this... I don't know if this is a life's experience but you capture the pain, the lost hope. The emptiness. Thank you. I've added you to my favorites!

Wow Loretta this is so good!

Aww this was a very cute poem... Sweet and genle, like a the ocean. Lol... I don't know what else to say, but it was rather sweet. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Beautifully painful. Lovingly bitter. Happily sad. I could feel the words as I read them, spilling from my own mouth. Very well done. xx