I don't get why you put this is the 'Friendship' poems...

But anyways, the flow was great. I didn't much enjoy how you told the poem, sorry.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

This poem brought home to me how I
had my daughter on a pedestal too. I
am sure I expected too much. It was a good reminder, thank you. Thank you for your kind words about my
poem (Lesson learned)
Deana

Aww it's so sweet. I can't much relate, but it's cute just the same lol. Great write once again. I liked the flow, and the rhyiming scheme was good. Excellent job! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Mmm. That was a very sweet and cute poem. Not sure if I could relate but none the less it was amazing. I loved how it ryhmed, and the flows was excellent.

Another favourite of mine.
I can relate to this a lot, and the imagery was amazing, as was the flow and wording.
I thought it would go better in the sad category, but it works here too.