Wow this is such a beautiful poem. Although I am not usually a big fan of repeating words and stuff in poems you managed to pull it off with a sence of power and grace. Nice work. The word choices couldn't have been any better. Thanx for sharing this piece of work with us all

This is really great. Was completely captivated. Wonderful imagery. Great flow of words and just all over a well discriptive piece. All I can say is...WOW.