Sometimes a attitude,

[an]

A very cute poem... You're a pretty good writer... It looks like you got caught by down raters for this isn't a '3.0' poem.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

This is a lovely sweet poem. Again a little more detail may be beneficial.

I think it was lovely, it was short but really captured me, it didnt have much detail about your daughter but it was still good
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