WoW!! that was a great poem, i know exactly how you feel, deffinatly gets 5/5, dont worry man, keep ya head up, that was just your first love, there are more to come, these relationships that don't work out and leave you in heartbreak just prepare you for the real thing, for the that one person you will spend the rest of your life with, you'll meet your real destiny sooner or later, for now focus on life and the oppertunities it has to offer, everything else will fall into place, trust me i know, peace homez, keep up the great work i love those last two line"I'm going crazy not being with you but i gotta keep it steady. I love you, I need you, my true love, my destiny"
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I love this poem!