Some powerful stuff. well done x

Ohhhh very good poem hun, Kinda reminds me of a dark poem rather than a sad one. Great job, 5/5

Deep, the first part is so strong that I just couldn't stop reading.. beautiful

Good work, arnt u a dark one;)

WOW, i liked this alot, very dark but moving... lovely poem

Great poem!

I loved your poems it was wonderful and one of the best i read keep up the good work