Comments : Medusa

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Medusa, Medusa with serpents for hair
    When once you were a maiden fair

    [I think you should change it to "When you were once a maiden fair" ..up to you though.]

    The poem was good though. Your flow and rhyming were great, I felt like it could have gone a little longer, but then again, doing that could ruin it. It was great, keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • Good poem and good rhyme scheme. except for the last two lines... awsome poem though... reminds me alot of some people

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    I love it, very poetic.

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Oh. Very nicely written. I enjoyed reading it.

  • 17 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    Short,sweet and it made sense