Aww! Sounds like something my mom would say to me =) It's cute. It sounds like a graduating poem. Whatever it is, it's very cute. =) 5/5 I loved how wel it flowed. Terrific! xoxo

Samantha

It's cute poem, but the fact that it was about a child at the end really threw me off and I didn't like it as much then. If it had been more nature like it would have seemed better to me.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Great use of words, you can still work on the flow

I like this one too, it makes me think of my fiance, he has to go now, but as much as it hurts,I know it would have to happen. Keep writing more, I love your styles, and don't forget to keep in touch

This is great!