I like it, it has strongs adjectives and nouns verbs too
it is really good job i like it
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Wow its amazing. i love it. i can relaly relate. so i kno how u feel. wow u have a lot of talent. i wish i could write like htat. i think this is a very great poem. keep on writing 5/5
take care and stay strong
angie

This was a really long poem but a really awesome one
and thanks for returning the favor...ur poems r cool
i kinda like this one a lot...well love ya bye!