Its good
really goos
;)

I thought that this poem was good, my advice is to wait, you are still so young, i am 21 and i just now found that love. you will run into alot of jerks, but it gives you knowledge of what you don't want in a man, so when mr. perfect comes along you will appreciate and love much more than you ever thought you could. good luck!

I absolutely love it! you are really good at writing!