Nelle --
I think that overall, this was a pretty good poem. The rhyming was really good, you`re good with that. But some of your lines ran too long, and some too short. Short lines you can usually get around easily, no problems. But long lines can get tough -- because then it messes up the rhyming. I would take out some of the words like 'always' that repeats several times, sometimes more than once per line. And maybe add some more common words into the lines that are too short. But overall, good job. The intent was very sweet. =D

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

You held my hand and guided me through my fears
You put me in the right, when I was always in the wrong

^^I loved those two lines right there. They were GREAT.

This was such a sad poem, hun. Very well written though. I loved how you worded this. There was just so much emotion in it. Loved it. The end. 5/5

Natalie``

Another wonderfully heartfelt poem. I love the way you are able to express yourself so well
You are so lucky to have such a great friend.
Although the rhyme scheme was a little rocky it was still lovely