Another great poem. i love this one too. i can relate to this poem.. u have talent. so keep writing. i like ur poems so i will keep reading.. great job 5/5
take care
angie

I really liked the ending line, but the flow of the poem seemed broken and unsure of itself.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

Ups, sorry, I have gave you 5 not 4! Sorry about that.

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