Great job. it's so sweet. 5/5
-Kakashi

I really like this!
its so cute..jus look out 4

"baby without you im incomplete
the finer things in life
just aren't as sweet"

it messes up the flow abit as its only 3 lines..maybe u cud just add a 4th?

but other than that i loved it

xxxx

This is a great poem...its so sweet i loove it♥=]