Very pretty I liked this a lot

Again, very nice triolet. I'm really happy to see that you're trying out so many different styles, and nailing them. This poem was beautiful & heartfelt. A enjoyable read. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

"Whisper wishes on a butterfly wing"
[Hmm, I thought it made more sense if you wrote 'butterfly's' wing. It gives it a sort of possession]

Argh!.. sorry it cut the rest of my comment off!.. haha.

I thought it was a great poem and I never really try formed poetry. This seems like fun to try. Good stuff :)