You did an odd thing and varied your rhyming flow... Which broke up the flow all together... But other wise I liked this; It was dark and sinister and very mysterious. Great Job.

xDarkSuicidex

Hello um Yes I am not to sure about the true meaning of this poem I think it is either about being abused physically or sexually but I am not to sure.get back to me please

maria

All I can say is wow...I think this is my favorite poem of yours. Amazing. I know what you say pm you find out what it means..or is about..but I think some poems are left to be interepted.And this one definatley makes one think.

I love the repetition in this poem, most of the time when people repeat lines it seems out of place but it really works here. the pace and flow are also very good, the poem really fits together and creates a strong impact on the reader.

-biscuit-

Great job, I enjoyed it a lot

Very deep poem! I'm speechless i'm blowned away from reading this.Keep it up and feel free to comment on my work also.