My heart is aching,
a feeling that's deep within.
It's crawling like an insect,
my love for you a sin.

Loved that beginning line.. It's amazing. So full of emotion and puts such an image in my head... Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wow, You are describing my life. Its a little freaky. Nice job. I like your style.You did a great job. 5/5
And thanks for reading my poetry Loretta