Comments : LABELED(stand up and shout it)

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is so true! I love that you did one on labels. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I thougth the idea behind this poem was really great and that you did say it in a strong manner. My suggestion is to not use those same labels a lot, like punk, freak, etc...and to work on the structure so that it's easy to follow the whole way through, but it's a good poem, it just needs a little work is all! Thanks for ur nice comment about my poem/song...I love to sing em!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    Too true. Ur poem get's the point across exactly how it should. So unfair.