Precious. The only piece of advice I can give you is to try and work on some structure. You write very well, the emotion is there, but you need to structure a little more:) Otherwise another beautiful piece of poetry. Emotions at its depths.

Godbless
Sammib

We're always together
But you never notice
How much i love your laughter
How much i miss your tears.
^^i really like this part.
i swear i've felt the same.beautiful work.
--lexie

Really nice it's got lots of feelin in it

I love it it deep

Excellent. i liked this 1 coz it really shows ahts goin on in ur head.

It was a good poem, at first though, the flow seemed a little off, cause you have this one massive long line, and then the rest of the poems lines were pretty short. But it was still a good poem. I liked it. =) Keep it up!

Natalie``

Awh, this poem was so sweet and amazing. Really great job with the wording an writting of it. I loved it.

Yet again another one of your good ones!

Another great poem, good job here as well.

Overall this was a very good poem. nice emotion and greatly written. the rhyming was thrown off a bit, but overall it was good. great job.
Driver

Wow. Great job. I loved the ending. It was amazing. Perfect way to end a great poem Hun. Keep up the great work.

5/5.. I feel the same way about my bff Jesse... I know Im dating him but it just seems like i miss that part.. ANd I always wonder if Im really going to be the one he comes to if he needs help!

There was no continuous format to this which confused the poem a bit. Nice, but not great

Aww.. that is a really sweet poem, and you can tell that it came straight from the heart. Great job on this! I hope everything works out for you! 5/5

Very excellent poem angel!!! a loved it, its so sweet but yet so sad at the end... awwwww, 5/5 from me

xoxo Lucy

Awwww.. that was so sweet! i loved it hunny.. you gotta write more poems, because i have done them both now! lol.. this had beautiful imagery and emotions and flowed well..nice job! 5/5

Aww you poor thing =( I know exactly how you feel. Hugs for you! =P I hope you find Mr. Right! (He is out there...somewhere) Keep that chin up and that head held high. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Very nicely written..Keep up the good work..and hey, thanks for commenting on my song..Hope you liked it:D

Nice to be in love huh?
Keep on writing on what u feel and like..

Ohwow. Haha, that is really adorable. I enjoyed this poem aswell. It was really sweet, and yet again I can relate, aswell most likely alot of people probabely have these feelings. Wonderful Write.