Heya Danielle! I liked this poem, even though I had already read it before you got it onto here. >.< Great flow, and it's not true, but it has a lot of emotion, and rhyming was great. Terrific poem! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Aww thats so sad, very touching subject and wording in this was very good. good strong ending that really reaches out. excellent work keep it up x