Comments : Because the Words Hung Heavy in the Air

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Not bad, Not bad at all

    Sustain me not with vain and idle hopes,
    With words alone I am most lightly fed.
    Cut free the brittle tangle of these ropes
    And leave all but the solid truth unsaid.

    Especially liked these lines. Great write.

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Damn! I wish I could write like this. I've never mastered it, but you my dear have hit one out of the park with this little ditty.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 17 years ago

    by *Daniel94*

    I really liked this poem and the name to, you r a very interesting person by the sounds of your profile. bye.