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In my dreams, I am someone who is not me
Someone who hides in the shadows of life
Away from all the worries and problems of the world
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I am someone who is all alone, waiting to tell my story
The world may never know me, but through my story, they will understand me
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I live in a world of tragedy and misery, but somehow I still cant learn to cope
I am someone whose story has yet to be heard
In my dreams, I am someone who is not me
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I took the liberty of making a few..adjustments if your like them great if not oh well, on its own this poem is great. It shows the striking self hate and yet hope for better with a wonderful choices of words and fantasic flow. I don't know if I did your feelings justice but this is what I got ffrom it, maybe its sparks some changes of your own Lol enjoy and keep it up!
In my dreams, I am someone who is not me,
Someone who hides in the shadows of life,
Away from the worries and problems of the world.
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I am someone who is all alone, waiting to tell my story
The world may never know me, but through my words
Someday, they will understand me
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I live in a world of tragedyand still I cant learn to cope
I am someone whose tale goes unheard of,
In my dreams, I am someone who is not me
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Awww, angie. you are someone to me. 5/5

Luv Niquee
xoxoxoxox

I love this poem! There is a lot of emotion in it! The only adjustment I think you could make to improve it is if you shortened the lines a bit--Great write! 5/5 Keep it up!

Hey hunnie, great poem, iz awsum, love mel

This is a great poem. it's so deep and real. it has awesome flow and the layout is awesome too. you're an amazing poet. good job. and thanks for the comment.

-rachel

Your someone too mee=) XoX Luve you hunn! [Chelss`