Enjoyed it Bill! Very erotic without all the vulgar words. Super poem!
Nate aka "The Tie Guy"

I love this poem Bill !
It's playful yet romantic, it's just...Oh my..breath taking !

As the sun gently rises in the east
Bathing us in its glorious rays
I once again become a passionate beast
Wanting to stay in bed with you for days
^^
I just absolutely love this stanza....you wild passionate beast ......lol....

My sore body a reminder of you
Smiling as tonight we shall again play
^^
Wonderful ending !

I have to say I think of all your love poems this one has got to be my absolute favorite .It flows of love, passion and a dash of playfulness all entwined to create a beautiful masterpiece ....
Wonderful write, my friend !

Bill, what can I say
You have such a marvelous talent. You r so descriptive. It was soooo wonderful. Loretta

Ooooohhh Bill!!! You've done it with this one! What a beautiful write!!! So it's not completely over after marriage, eh? HAHAHAHA

Wonderful poem!!!! Kind of sensual...ooh la la...I liiikkkkeeeee

I enjoyed!!!! Nice to have read another masterpiece of yours!!!! ;)

My most fave of them all.
Good job, Bill!
Kudos for you!

Absoultely enchanting....
I think it's rather brave of you to write a poem like that .
Seventeen thumbs up (If I had that many)

-k

Very nice and beautiful