It was pretty good

Nancy --
I think that you did a wonderful job on this. Right before I came to r/r/c another of your poems, I read the story about Gregory and your son. I`m so sorry to hear that ;; if you ever need to talk to anyone, I`m always here for you. I may only be 13, but I`m more help than you may think. =D
The rhyming and flow of this poem was perfect. -- and it held a lot of emotion, which is definitely important.I`m so sorry if this is non-fictional, and I hope that it works out. But if it is in fact fictional, you`re very convincing! Well done, 5/5.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Very nice. I am living that right now. Freaky,not the physical stuff but the emotional part. Thanks for comments on my message shread. I have been doing the same as you. I read probably 25 or 30 poems a day, and rate and comment on almost all of them. The only ones I don't comment on are those who obviously are not taking this seriously. And their poetry stinks, but its funny thatthey get alot of votes. I notice its alot of the same people. Teen agers mostly You did great Loretta

This burning so much.

[That sounds like me, lol..]

you love so free.
[your]

Now, I loved this poem because it was so simple and so true.. Yet again Im not sure what else to say, but it had a great flow..

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

WOW! Awesome piece of writing. I really enjoyed the way the poem drew me in. I think you did an excellent job on it. Keep writing, you have alot of talent :)