I like this so much!!

Beautifully written. I like your style of writing. Its different. This piece explains the emotions you are feeling very well. You can feel your heart break in this write.

Welldone.Godbless
Sammib

That is a sweet poem i really liked that u should keep it u let me know when u have a new one on k.k

Thx for your comments... ill keep you gus updated ü

Wow that's really good better than all my poems

Ur really good u shoud write a book

Beautifully written

Holy lord this is such a good poem. i really wasnt expecting it to be so good. you could even turn this isnt a song and it would be amazing.. keep it up youve got crazy talent..
dee

Hey i love ur poem it''s really good
keep it up! i know everyone would like to read all ur poems i know i would!

Hey! i really loved this poem. it if full of emotion and ....well what can i say? i love it! keep it up xxx

Didnt appeal to me too much but i guess all those people thought it was great.

I think your rhythm was a bit off and it didnt seem to have much meaning to you.

But as long as it means something to you thats all that matters
3/5
~Emah

Wow powerful stuf i like it :)

I guess my feelings i should no longer hide
I love you and i want you to stay by my side

I want to hold you in my arms so tight that ill never let go
I want to be with you forever, i hope now you know

[[You started all four lines with I, I, I, I ..maybe try and re-word them.]]

I really liked how you ended it. Thought it was the strongest part of the poem. Great job!

Natalie``

Wow that's an emotional poem. Really well written I loved it great job Hun.

Wow this is so good!

It is a perfect poem that many ppl can relate to, you wrote it so nicely and expressed ur words nicely. keep it up.5/5

Wow, this poem was nicely done. the flow seemed to be smooth, and great composure. the ending was kinda rocky, but great job overall.
Driver

Awh. I love it. Very well written, the flow was amazing and it kept my attention. It was sad at the same time aswell as sweet, great job though. :]

5/5... Wow.. Im amazed.. Your writing is so refreshing!

Thx for your wonderful comments! ill try improving it now and then... love your comments... i appreciate them!

~angel~