I loved the repetitit on and all the stanzas in the middle..i especially love the "blood necklace" line..that was great..u hav awesome skills..
love ya lots,
sore

This is good. I doubt you are my favorite girl for those qualities but you are my favorite for writing. 5/5
-Kakashi

You are a great writer and i really like this, thax for the comment. if you write a new one just write to me again and tell me the name, i'll check it out, bye.