Wow I really like this... and it's something I think people that have depression can relate too. I was saying to my friend as much as I hide my feelings I sometimes wish people would ask what was up even though they have no clue. But anyway... that's another story... but I like your poem.

Keep writing =].

Elle xxx

Awww... that was soo good... i have depression n i can defintely relate to it... jus like elle said i also keep to myself but i wish ppl would jus notice that im not fine n i do need help but i guess some ppl jus dont care.
but keep up the good work, excellent poem =)