Brittni --
Again, I had to give this poem a 4/5. The flow was much better on this, not so forced, and it seemed to have a steady rhythm to it. But again with the grammar -- you`re writing questions, but not ending them with '?', and not capitalizing your 'I'`s. You`re also not adding apostrophes where they should be ;; you really need to watch that, or people won`t take your work seriously. I would try writing a rhyming poem ;; they`re easier and don`t seem so forced. Not a bad job, 4/5.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood