I see your face,
and fall asleep.
My love for you,
in my heart to keep!

This is the best line out of them all. Now, I'm not going to lie, I'm not sure what this poem was really about.. I thought it was over a boy you were liking, but then your son? I'm confused. Nonetheless It had a good flow and the last line really gave you the rating.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5