I think this should be called 'Would You Could You'.. For you use it all the time and just state it's for the boy at the top of the poem... But that's my suggestion only.

Cute poem though.. I think you DO have a son so excuse my previous comments about getting confused. This is a medium emotion poem (it's neithrr strong nor weak) but it had good flow as well.

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