Great poem, I love it!!!

I really liked this poem, it was good, great rhyming, not forced at all, flowed well and had some good imagery, overall, a lovely piece

Loretta --
I really liked this poem, good thing it`s featured. Personally, the flow in the first stanza was the best. The other stanzas were pretty good flow wise, but not as good. I didn`t dock you for that, though. The rhyming was a lot better and more predictable in this poem ;; good. Nice job, it`s been nice reading your work! 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

I simply love it... It's an amazing write. You also let your poems flow and run about freely; great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wow-the imagery in this piece is amazing! I like how the lines are short, yet are filled with a lot of emotion---Your word choice is perfect and expresses the passion in this poem very well---Great write!

5/5

Oooh, these are my favorite types of poems. Short lines that convey so much.
Your flow is flawless and the imagery is mind blowing.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Quite cute, and there are many ways to understand this poem, which makes it exiting.

Love,
Wings of an Angel