Comments : Dare I ?

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl this was sad and touching and very powerful. lots of emotion, obviously lot of meaning behind this poem. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Damn I thought I commented on this. I loved that last stanza though. It made me all sad and shiet. Lol...i'm always coming to your profile and readin your poems...lol Sooooo how you been?!?! um yeah idk what im writin...its 4:20am lol im bout to go to beddd....I love you and missss youuuuu. imma send you a email tomorrow..or next time i get on...ttysoooon.

    Que Dios te bendiga

    [[ FlaKa ]]

    Btw, this is a new account...so mi familia no me encuentre estos poemas...even tho they will eventually but yeah...

  • Its was really sad and really powerfull....

    well done

    xoxo

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Nice poem. It explanes the emotions we go through when we are confused between dreams and reality... great write.