Another great poem! i loved the other one about charlie,,, and this one too,,, i love reading your poems,,, they are soo good :D

That is a very cute poem...the end was quite a twist but a great twist ;)

Great job

Awh thats funny too. I liked it great job.

Hehe very funny! I liked it. Brought a smile to my face, I can honestly say that and i'm not exactly very smiley at the moment. It was really great!