Ok I got one word for that...EXCELLENT. It was very good. I like how you had some of the same words as in the song and I like how you made it the opposite of what she said like you wrote "I guess you want to be ...A murderer" instead of "I don't want to be...a murderer." 5/5

I loved the way u used some words from the song..i love that song but its nice to see the other end's story...creative idea carried out well...good job... thx for ur comments...
love ya lots,
sore

Very good now u should find someone to sing it lol

Ok so that song unfaithful had really annoyed me too...
i love this version so much more
you are really creative!

Ha, wow. I got so tired of unfaithful. It kind of makes me wonder if rihanna even knows what it feels like, how can she sing about it?? I definitely like yours much better. It's incredibly creative. *Great Work*

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I really like this one. i love the original song too, but i can see why you wrote this!!! i agree with most of what you wrote too and i was playing the song while i read it and it fits pretty well into the song so yeah... awesome!

xoxo

That was Beautiful!! You are so talented! great work!! xxxxxx

Nice. I think this version will be better 5/5

That was really creative! I never would've thought of it. (of course, I'm a female) Keep it up!

Now all you need is a record deal
I actually listened to the song while reading this. Brilliant poem, really creative that you were able to change the lyrics. Will be listening out for your version of this on the radio :)

Take Care.

I like this song. My friends say the sone unfaithful is mine. You did an awesome job.

AMAZING!
I like this, it fits with the tune of the original so well.
Good job.