Hmm, well, it didn't really seem like a poem for the reasons you list at the bottom.. It is just a list of questions.. Maybe add in a little more emotion, or some descriptions.. It is nice to have questions in sometimes but I don't think the whole thing should be made up of it.. Keep it up though 4/5

Hey you commented on my poem "just a little walk" .thanks. you make very nice poems keep it up

Ummm ok, so u got back with ur ex (the 1 before nick)? so YOU broke up with nick and now he said those things. umm, i think u sort of deserve it but not all. i mean if u dumped nick alredy why does he care it's not his business. but if he dumped you, the same reason why does he care? he dumped u alredy. so i'm not really sure. but i'm not really sure too about ur surprising decision about getting back with ur EX. maybe, Nick just really wants u to be safe that he doesn't want anyone to hurt u....i mean AGAIN. i guess he just really cares for you, you know. he's saying these stuff so u won't go with ur ex. well that's all i can say. and remember, i will never hate you.

I went to san mateo (close to san francisco) and went to las vegas.......yea it was fun, but i was exhausted....

Very very good poem 5/5

Well written i hope you find your one and only i gave up and im only 16 good job on the poem tho keep it up

Well written i hope you find your one and only i gave up and im only 16 good job on the poem tho keep it up