Wow i loved this poem..it was amazing..I loved your use of vocabulary..it's great! 5/5

Wow.. .I really loved this.. It sounds like something I would write; great job!

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

My favorite stanza is the last. one thing, is the first stanza suppose to have a different rhyming theme?

Very nicely done. Loved how you ended it. Great job! 5/5

Natalie``

A great poem here as well
you are so far the best poet i read in this site.

This was good

This is a great and deep write Michael I have always loved and thoroughly enjoyed your poetry and this is yet another reason why! Its thought provoking like the majority of your works the more I read it the better I can understand it and the deeper it gets - another fantastic write my friend :o)

This poem reminds me of something.. its very good!! i like the ideas!! X

Omg soo good