Firstly in all honestly I did not even bother to read this poem, I'm sure it's a great meaningful poem but all the wif owt yuh and etc are really not captivating and enjoyable. And you'll probably find that all the people that opened this poem did not read it because they couldn't be bothered to try to figure out how special this girl is! SO PLEASE DON'T ABBREVIATE OR WRITE LIKE A TODDLER! I don't mean to be offensive but i'm sure that if you rite better with actually english words more people will read and comment!

Mwah