It is not bad, great meaning and emotion in it, I like it alot and i will give it 5/5 cause i can't do better.

I liked it! 5/5

Well like you said you post first drafts. A couple spelling and grammar errors, and I really like the flow/style of the poem up until the last stanza. Just a simple reworking of it will improve it a lot, if you're inclined to do such a thing. I know I have a hard time editing my own poems once they're written so I hardly expect someone else to do it.