I really liked your poem... well thought out and constructed... great job

Great poem. One little thing that I'm a little confused with... You paragraphs are all rhyming, however the second paragraph is missing this. Get's a little hard to read. Overall a great poem!

I liked it i totally got a "ready to see what i can do" vibe from it. im just upset that i m too new to have read any of your past poems

Hey this poem is awesome.. i simply loved the way it worked so perfectlyyyy....its perfectly fluent..
keep it up :)
great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5