This is incredible....absolutely amazing. 5/5

Hey that is really good..
BAM LIKE WOW TOTTALY A 5..
so plz read and rate mine as ive done for you..

So I love this poem...My favorite line is...A broken smile, I do defy, What is truth?I am a lie.

Goodness,
How talented you are indeed.
Such magnicent arrays of thought provoking lines.

Keep on writing on what u feel and like..

God Bless you always!

I REALLy LOVED IT thats so pretty... 5/5 girl keep writing your great and forget them haters that are down rating and dissing they aint nothin your writing is awsome

Incredable! 5/5

That is such a wonderful poem i thought of a lot of things especially Betrayal

Amazing work, really nice poem, Great job.

The flow was nice and the topic was well put..the message clear. It was good, i thought maybe the poem could have been longer to enhace more feelings but it's good the way it is. Well done

5/5

Nice poem lol how many comments you got here ? lol

Great poem 5/5

Awesome Poem! Amazing...I'm kinda speechless, good job.

Allia

Wow! That is so...freakin cool :D And really good 5/5!

Wow. such a nice poem. right when i was done reading it the only thing i c ould say was wow.

Absolutely amazing. Keep on writing! :)

I really like this one.. you did so good...

I love it. it is AMAZING.

Top notch!

I absolutely love this poem. It's great. I really like the stanza, "A touch that lied,
Broken Trust,
Lost Love,
I am Lust."

It's so simple yet so complex and it rhymes which is awesome. It's hard to get a point across and rhyme and you did it well :)

Keep writing this was excellent!