Ooo first comment.
i liked it.
it was a perfect length.
it flowed together really nicely.
keep up the good work. 5/5

Hey jason is stephanie i m new in this but i have being writing poems for a long time, l really enjoy your poems,i really like in the way that you write you poem you write them like if you are here telling me next to me, i love you poem the time is my favrite one,hope to read more of you poems jason

Hey

I think this is an excellent piece. Great job