Wow.. this was amazing.. the words you used were beautiful and full of power.. your descriptions painted lovely imagery throughout the poem.. nice job! 5/5

Oh yeah, I love this! It reminds me of HIM's song Heartache Every Moment.

Awesome format as well. Take care and keep it up~Holly

This is really quite good. Great format. Also loved the whole flow of the poem.

I like that poem
it confused me a lil bit
but its was still good!!!
45/45

Oh wow. Wow oh wow. I LOVE this poem. It's incredible. This one of the best I have ever read. Well, that's just me. And I love it. I enjoy the aesthetic relations and word choice. Very beautiful.

I really like this one. It has a lot of meaning. I had to read it twice to get the whole meaning. But it's really good.

This is beautiful...perfect....really enjoy the way you formatted it.... the rhyme scheme...love it all! All the best, Debbie

Wow...
Amazing, breathtaking...
I am speechless. Your poetry always leaves me in awe.
Another one elegant, mesmerizing piece from you, filled with such inner beauty. Deeply touching poem, flawless and priceless from the beginning to the end. Every stanza holds pure perfection and the lines between stanzas are endlessly effective. I truly admire your writing skills.
This is poetic gem, a poem with so vivid imagery and complex feelings.
Keep up the superb work!