Wow this is so good! i really like it!

Hope,fate,destiny,belive
[[should be 'believe']]
a fountin that drips not water,
[[should be 'fountain']]
but miricals
[[should be miracles]]
yet blinds you from misary
[[should be misery]]

beliving is a start and following your destiny is a clue
the secret to your fate is having hope your wish will come true
[[I liked those lines alot. Thought they were awesome.]]

It was a great poem, you just needa fix up the mistakes, and wah-lah ..it'll be great. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

{P.S. You're hot.}

Great job this is realy realy nice