Hey nice work! it was short but descriptive. very emotional. loved it 5/5

I liked the other one more than i like this one but that's only because i like long poems but that's just me.
it was still very good
descriptive
keep it up
~HazE

That was awesome and desciptive.
nice job! :)
5/5
-steph

I hope you know you can always confide in me cuz I always do to you!! And I wouldn't want to overwhelm you!!!! YOur not meaningless because you got friends that love you with all they got. Good Write...

Rachel