Beehh tis good tis good i enjoyed reading it, keep it up candice!

Candice --
I had to give this poem a 4/5. The flow really didn`t work out too well ;; it seemed really forced. I also didn`t like how you ended two lines with the word 'me'. It kind of changes the whole scheme a bit, if you ask me. The spelling and grammar were good, though. Not bad, 4/5. Keep it up!

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

I love this poem its really deep and detailed
i like your style of writing, its really unique