Comments : Venom

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Positive on the outside
    Negative to the core
    Washed up, washed out loneliness
    Bulimic evermore

    ^^I really liked how that stanza was worded! ..This was such a sad poem. But you expressed the emotions really well. It was a great write. Keep it up, and smile. 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by Cimara

    Wow again! you give me shivers. xoxo