*gulp* O_O, What can I say other than sheer brilliance, and a bit worriedness for you now..
~Luv Sean

Candice --
Hey! Sorry for the delay in getting your comments ;; I had an emergency to tend to. But back to your poem..
You did a nice job. I felt that the rhyming was complicated ;; I don`t know if you rhymed unintentionally, but I would definitely consider either breaking this up into smaller stanzas, or, watching what you write. When some parts rhyme and others don`t, it kind of confuses the reader. The flow, spelling, and grammar in this poem was perfect. You did a great job, 5/5, keep it up!

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood